We've all had those pushy sales calls where the sales rep just won't take no for an answer. Whether or not you buy, the call leaves you feeling bad and somehow tainted. No one likes that kind of approach and it certainly doesn't lead to long term business relationships.

Why not?

Those pushy sales calls use coercion and what you might call unsavoury tactics to get you to act, rather than providing genuine solutions with genuine products or services. They may get the sale but they give selling a bad name.

Using excessive punctuation like !!!!! or **** in email subject lines is like using pushy sales tactics

The purpose is ostensibly to try and get the email to stand out in people's in-box and create a sense of urgency, so that they open it, but in reality it comes across as over- excited and just plain annoying.

Most internet email account providers have spam filters set to detect spam emails. Spam or junk emails are defined as 'unsolicited bulk emails'. Bulk here just means one email sent out to large numbers of email addresses. If you look in your own junk folders you will see hundreds or thousands of emails promoting every kind of miracle cure. Many use excessive punctuation and so the filters tend to associate this with junk emails.

It's a big problem

According to the Message Anti-Abuse Working Group, the amount of spam email was between 88-92% of email messages sent in the first half of 2010.

Another trick spammers use to try and foil the filters, is to disguise words like "free" by replacing some of the letters with numbers, punctuation marks or symbols e.g. "fr££".

Obviously we don't want our genuine emails to be mistaken for such communications, so what can we do?

You don't need to bother with pushy tactics or tricks with punctuation

As with all communication, if you are genuinely providing something of value for your readers, then you don't need to bother with such tricks.

However there are ways to improve your subject lines to increase the chances of getting your email opened. Here are a few quick tips:

  • Use a headline that entices and arouses curiosity, leaving the reader wanting to know more e.g. "How to eat ice cream guilt free". 'How' and 'why' are good words to use.
  • Keep the subject line relevant to the content of your email e.g. "Tickets now on sale for the Entisubi Music Festival" – followed by details of the festival and ticket sales.
  • Limit your subject line to about 50 characters.

How to talk about offers without risking your email being binned

If you are giving away something free or you have a special offer that your customers would value, you certainly want to advertise the fact. Follow these simple guidelines to avoid your genuine communication getting junked.

  • Be aware that words like "free" or "special offer" are used by spammers and so put them in the middle or towards the end of the subject line, rather than at the beginning.
  • Don't use e.g. "free" in every subject line.
  • If you are offering something "free" and you put this in the subject line, make sure the details of the offer are in the first paragraph (keeping your subject line relevant).
  • Ensure sensitive words are used sparingly in the main email. The filters react to how many times such words are used as well as which words are used.
  • If you use email marketing software like Market Mailer, Mail Chimp or Aweber then use the spam checker functions. These give your email a score according to how spam-like it is. The score for this email is 3.7. Anything below 5 is not usually classified as spam.

Remember your job is to provide something of value for your customers in print, by email and in person. As long as you keep that in mind, you won't need to bother with subject lines full of !!!!!!! or ££££££££s or *******.

 


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Fiona Davies, from UK networking organisation Women In Rural Enterprise (WIRE), spoke to me recently about how WIRE uses e-newsletters to communicate with and promote its members.

Fiona is passionate about rural businesses and she tells us in detail how the WIRE e-newsletters are a tool for all their members who can promote themselves and their products and services.

Their e-newsletter has evolved from being a member benefit, exclusively for members, to being a promotional tool sent out to over 8000 people, only 2000 of whom are members.

For micro and small rural businesses this demonstrates the benefit of piggy backing on other targeted lists. By joining an organisation that includes your target audience you can put your products and services in front of a large list.

This can be a low cost way of getting involved with e-newsletter campaigns before you set up your own campaign.

If you have a membership organisation, then e-newsletters are an affordable and visible way to promote your members and keep them in touch with all the benefits of their membership.

Listen to the full interview Fiona Davies from WIRE talks about e-news (just over 30 minutes long) for a fascinating insight into e-newsletters and the world of women in rural business.

To find out about WIRE and local networks in your area, visit the WIRE website.

 
Heather Gorringe, successful entrepreneur and huge fan of social media tells how her company,  Wiggly Wigglers – a natural gardening company, uses e-newsletters to increase sales from her subscriber list of over 50,000.

Heather is known for her pioneering use of social media. She explains how Wiggly e-newsletters integrate with other social media and how they have changed from being an information tool to a sales tool since adopting them in 2003.

Listen to just over 20 minutes of extracts from the interview.

Heather Gorringe from Wiggly Wigglers gives us the low down on her e-newsletter campaigns

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Learn from this fascinating interview, where Heather reveals detailed facts and figures about her e-news campaigns.

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Who’s your target audience – is it people out in the countryside?

No, our target audience is probably anyone who has any dreams of being a farmer, to whatever degree they consider that  to be possible, so even if you’ve got a flat with a window box, then we want to help you make that window box peat free. If you’ve got 20 acres we want to start you off with a wildlife pond and make sure that you’ve got green washing up liquid.

When did you start using e-newsletters?

We started using e-newsletters probably around 2003 – very early on in terms of e-news. At that point we  weren’t able to track results and we use them very much as information rather than a sales tool. These days they are one of our primary sales tools.
What prompted you to start using them?
We wanted to connect with our customers more and we wanted to give them lots of information. As times gone on and we’ve adopted lots more tools like Facebook and Twitter and the catalogue’s expanded, we use the e-news much more as reminders to people, e.g. anything that’s instant and needs to be talked about straightaway, I like to do an e-news for and I have no compunction in putting in a call to action and an ask to purchase in the e-news.

How often do you send them out – is it on a rigid schedule?

It’s about every couple of weeks but it’s not rigid at all. For example our hops – fresh hops – have just come in, so I’ll do a quick announcement on an e-news to let people know that, but  I will no doubt do my regular e-news next week anyway.

Going back, you said that originally they were more of an information tool. Were they more like an offline newsletter – was it longer with several articles.

Absolutely -  they used to have well over 400 words of text in them. Nowadays, if I wanted to write lots of text I would link to a blog post rather  than write lots and lots of text in the e-news because if you look at the stats and even think about the way that you or me use an e-news we want to click, we’re dying to click – so it’s not the best place to put lots of text in. It wouldn’t stop me from putting text it just means that I would put that on my blog and link to it.

Which programme do you use  to deliver you e-news?

Mail chimp and it’s fantastic.

How much technical support do you get from Mail Chimp and how important is that?

I’ve never phoned them. Every bit of support is online. It’s so easy to use. We’ve used lots of programmes over the years. Even I can send the e-news whereas before somebody else had to do it because I’m not a vey technical person. It’s totally easy, so they tell you, your complaints, they give you your reports. So in terms of their support, except for the initial sign up, where we needed a little bit of help, we haven’t needed any.
Roughly how many different  programmes have you been through before Mail chimp?
I think probably 3 others.

What made you change programmes each time?

Last time we were with a company called Communicator. They wanted to put our prices up. They charged us per e-news after a certain amount and our e-news were gradually increasing and as with everything  you don’t necessarily keep your eye on each single person that signs up and it ended up costing us over £800.00 for a month. That was  absolutely outrageous, so I contacted them and had several extended discussions with them and  eventually decided to look around for something else. We found Mail Chimp which costs us I think around £250 per month and is so much better for us in terms of stats.

And the previous one – was that price issues or were there other issues – you’ve obviously gone through a number of different programmes there?

We used our own in house system at that point. That’s all I can remember.  The problem with that was it was taking too long to send it, we hadn’t  got any stats and it was quite a difficult way of operating because our own server was responsible for the spam filter etc and we couldn’t really see what we were doing well enough. There was nothing really wrong – it was the worry that the possiblity of not being able to see what we were doing well enough. The reporting wasn’t good enough, whereas in Mail Chimp, the reporting is exceptional.

How do you decide what to put in your newsletters, you’ve said if there’s an immediate thing like hops you’ll bang one out?

Do you have a plan over 6 months or do you do it on an e-news by e-newsletter basis.

I know that I’m going to do 2 e-newsletters a month and I know that I’m going to make sure there’s an  offer or a call to action in each newsletter and I have my historical newsletters so I know when we did flowers last year etc.  So I’ve kind of got a basic calendar of what I can do if nothing else comes up  that’s more important. e.g. I know that I’ve got my next e-newsletter is very likely to be about hedgehogs because people should  be thinking about their hedgehogs hibernating.

The one after that will probably be about Bokashi compost because it’s a good time to do that. I just look at it seasonally as to what I would want to be doing in my garden or my home and therefore what I think our audience would be interested in that point on. The worst thing is if you do something that is irrelevant at the moment that you do it. So it can be the best product or the best service but if you don’t want it at that particular moment then no-one’s going to buy it.

It’s timed so that the aim is that it’s topical so that people say ‘oh’ yep that’s what I’m thinking about right now.

Do you know which has been your most successful e-newsletter?

The best result was the Summer Sale in terms of opening rate and in terms of click rate.
The opening rate was 20.18%. The click rate was 6.25%

I can go through to Google Analytics and see what that meant.

So you can actually go through and relate that to sales on the day, is that right?

Yes I can do that.
I can look and see where people came from.

Do you use codes so you can relate the sale to the e-newsletter?

No I don’t need to because I can track through from Mail Chimp to Google analytics I can tell you that from that e-news we had 2761 visits in that month from the 4th to the 31st August that directly came from e-news. Then I can follow that through to what they actually generated. Wiggly Wigglers e-list generated £7541.49.

You can relate that directly from visits from the e-news?

That shows that they clicked through from the e-news.

You clearly have a very clear link between e-newsletters and sales. You’ve said that’s quite simple to do with Mail Chimp – is that right?

Yes, and if you have a small list I believe it’s free.

I can see that you love the stats and clearly that’s ultimately the only way to measure the success in financial times of these e-newsletters.

Well not necessarily, before I had this ability I did go on gut feeling.

The monthly plan starts from $10.00 if you’ve got 500 people on your list.

Before we had Mail Chimp we did our best to measure it and we could kind of see an uptake and I suspect that a lot of small businesses would see an uptake much easier. If you’ve got a couple of products you can see whether or not business has increased without being obsessed with stats but because the stats are so easy once you’ve got them set up. I could not imagine life without analytics now and it really is so easy to do, then the stats are worth it.

I think that if I had less than 2000 products and I had simple products then you don’t necessarily need the stats.

What I’m trying to say is that I don’t think stats are the be all and end all. In the sense that if it  takes you too long to assess the stats by then you could have done another e-news. They are so simple that because Mail Chimp and Analytics gives you the information then I become really keen on stats because they are so easy to see and I can see the results.

You know £7,000 odd from one e-news that’s cost me well under £500.00 is to my mind a staggering reason to do e-newsletters for Wiggly Wigglers.

With a bigger list and a larger amount of products a 1% difference in openings or clicks or whatever translates into a fair amount of money, doesn’t it?

You can have a huge difference. I’ve given you the best one. If I go back I’ve got one on 27th May that only had a 2.5% click rate. If you don’t get people  to open them and you don’t get people to click through, obviously it’s going to be a disaster.

On that clicking through. I wanted to talk to you about subject lines. Is that an area you’ve changed over the years?

Yes and that’s partly due to you, you came here and said you know, this is how you need to communicate so we think much more about why they’re going to open it, rather than what it is.

Having said that Mail Chimp will give you a clue as to what’s going to be a disaster. So if you click “sale, free” all the time, then that’s not going to go through the spam filters. It gives you a basic idea of what’s a good subject line. It also, the most important thing has been where they click. If we put the interesting bit too far down, they don’t click. They generally seem to click in the top third of the e-news. It sounds completely obvious but I didn’t know that until I saw the stats.

For a lot of people this is a new form of communication and it was interesting about your journey from the longer information type e-newsletter. I think that’s where most people think of starting because they can relate it to a print newsletter they might have seen.

You’ve mentioned a few other online tools that you use. Could you just explain to us how the e-newsletter integrates with other internet tools like Facebook or Twitter, or maybe it doesn’t, does it stand alone?

No, everything integrates with everything. Often I hear people saying I don’t think Social Media can work for me. How do you get followers? How do you get listeners to your podcast? How do you get people on Facebook group? We use our e-news to do that. So for example on the last e-newsletter that I did, we always put on the bottom, follow Wiggly Wigglers on Facebook, follow Heather, follow Farmer Phil. You can see that 0.7% have clicked through to follow Heather on Twitter.

That’s 11 clicks (you might think that’s tiny) but for me that’s 11 people that are interested enough to go to Twitter and that’s how we  get other followers which means that we can communicate with other people the way they want to be communicated with. It’s not that I’m obsessed with social media although I really do like it, it’s that different people  want to listen or talk in different ways, so e.g. I hate my mobile phone. I don’t want to talk on it. I don’t want anyone phoning up on it. I don’t want you calling round here (this is in my personal life), but if you want to tweet me, I’m very, very interested because I can take that at my convenience. All these tools provide different ways of communicating conveniently.

With our e-news for example we try and send it out at 12.30, so just before lunch time because we can see that people like browsing just before lunch and so that seems to work a little bit better for us. It might be different if you’ve got a product like wine, it might be better if you sent it out at 6.30, I don’t know. For us at lunchtime, people like thinking about their gardens – I suppose it’s a way to relax – I don’t know.

It’s about finding what works and doing a bit of testing to see what works for your product or service.

I think what you’re doing is particularly good because what I would want is to see what other people are up to candidly, honestly because when I look at my stats it depresses me that only 19% of people open the thing. I’ve no idea if that is bad or good. So a bit of benchmarking and being able to compare  with other people would be great. Often I think people start an e-news and think oh well only 10% of people opened that, so it’s a waste of time.

Actually it’s not because it’s probably a different 10% this week to next week and you know how many people open your catalogue if you send it and if they do open it, how many people read it. I like the fact that you’ve got some way of benchmarking it and comparing case studies so that people like me can see what other people are doing to make us feel better.

How large is your list?

Currently 51, 919

Having launched a product e.g. a calendar, and having see there was interest, would you plan an offer email on those products somewhere down the line?

Yes there will be a little reminder. Probably a P.S. These are quite sweet because people go to the p.s. On one e-news we had a P.S. On the last e-news I did a P.S. about Wrap’n Mats. It’s right at the point when people are going back to school. They’re good for school kids because you don’t have to have a plate and they’re quite hygienic and easy to use. I think we sold 42 Wrap’n mats. Which is great. I don’t get obsessed with “oh I need to turnover £3000.’ What I try and get obsessed with is “ah 42 people wanted that”. I try and think about how many wants there were, not the value of the order. If I sent an e-news about a £2500 Wiggly Ride On. If one person wanted it, that would be great, but no-one else would want it. I like to go on click throughs as a good measure. Or at least open rates and click throughs.

Interview ends

 

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I recently interviewed David Dean of Sussexwaymeat. David farms on the Sussex Surrey border. He has a mixed, 60 acre farm and on farm butchery.

David confesses to being a bit 'in the dark' about technology when he started his e-news campaign but this hasn't stopped him harnessing this powerful tool to increase his takings.

He generously agreed to talk to me about his experience of using e-news to promote his business. You can listen to the interview right now. You'll be taken to another page on my website. Just click the link to listen at your computer.

 

It's 6pm on a Monday evening, you switch on the TV and sit down to watch the news. Instead of the news you find the Antiques Roadshow. What's going on? Confused and slightly disturbed you go away. The next day, come 6pm you feel uncertain and unsettled. Will the news be back on? The news is always on at 6pm. You rely on getting your news at 6pm. Now it has changed and you don't know when you can get your news. What do you do? Your routine has been disturbed. Maybe you switch on the radio or go and get your news online. You have to get your news some other way. Some way you can rely on.

Make a schedule and stick to it

We are all creatures of habit and we like routine. Things we can rely on. If you plan to deliver e-newsletters, the first rule is decide on a schedule and stick to it. You don't have to send 3 a week. In fact I would advise against sending 3 a week unless you have a compelling reason to mail your readers that often.

How often is less important than how regular your e-newsletters are. If you say you will send an e-newsletter or e-zine out twice a year. That's perfect. Just make sure you tell your readers when the 2 e-newsletters will be published and then make sure you send them out, at those times.

If you are going to send your e-newsletter or e-zine out monthly then you need to get organised. Your readers will come to expect a regular dose of news and information from you. If it doesn't show up, your readers will be uncertain, unsettled and may look elsewhere for this kind of information. First you need to decide your schedule. How often will you send them out?

• annually
• twice a year
• quarterly
• monthly
• twice a month
• fortnightly
• weekly
• twice weekly

Once you have this decided you can look at how to make this happen.

How do you stick to a schedule?

Planning, planning and more planning. The best way to ensure you stick to your schedule is to get organised. Breaking down the project into its component parts is the first step to getting organised and planning your e-newsletter or e-zine.

Depending on the type of e-newsletter you're publishing, various tasks need to be completed before you can send out an e-newsletter:-

1. Brainstorm topics for articles (this should fit in with your overall e-newsletter strategy).
2. Decide on any special promotions.
3. Create relevant content and graphics for special offers to be posted on your website and/or set up new pages, buy buttons etc.
1. Carry out any background research or interviews.
2. Source and prepare any images, illustrations or cartoons.
3. Write content.
4. Edit and proof read all content.
5. Get content approved (if necessary).
6. Upload content, images and links.
7. Format e-newsletter.
8. Send out test e-newsletters.
9. Test links and fix any issues.
10. Publish and distribute.
11. Post e-newsletter to your website or microsite.

If you publicise that your e-newsletter will go out the second Wednesday of every month, then you can work backwards using your diary or online planner to distribute the tasks through the previous weeks or days. The more people involved the longer you need to get the work completed. Even with a small team, you might need to allow 2 weeks for all these tasks to be completed.

Just to be clear….

Creating a regular schedule for your e-newsletters or e-zines is an important commitment you make to your readers. Regularity is reassuring and helps establish you as a reliable presence. However sticking to this schedule and publishing your e-newsletters at regular intervals requires organisation and planning. Once you know this, it may dictate how often you decide to send out the e-newsletters. Better to send 6 e-newsletters a year, on time, every time than to start fortnightly then dwindle to monthly, then fizzle out.

Create a schedule you can stick to, then your e-newsletters will drop onto the email door mat, regular as clockwork.
 

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You're walking down the high street and Saturday shoppers flow past and around you. Who catches your eye? Is it the family in the sensible rain coats? The boys in uniform baseball caps? The men in suits? The middle aged women in well-cut clothes? Not particularly.

The people who catch your eye are the ones that stand out……. to you.

The Dionne quintuplets--Marie, Emelie, Cecile, Annette and Yvonne celebrate their first birthday in style in Callander, Ontario, on May 28, 1935. --- Image by � Bettmann/CORBIS

Dionne quintuplets first birthday 1935

That might be the women showing lots of flesh.

The men with the shades and expensive shoes

The girl with the orange hair

The man in a gorilla suit

The quintuplets

These figures that stand out are the ones that arouse your curiosity. Either they are unusual or they tap into your current desires.

What is the subject line?

As the name suggests, it gives the reader a clue about what's inside. If what's inside appeals to them they are more likely to open it.

If you think of snail mail, envelopes give you clues about the contents.

Brown envelopes = boring stuff like bills
Pink envelopes = exciting stuff like love letters
Envelopes with windows = letters from the insurance companies
Envelopes big writing and exclamation marks across the corner = sales stuff
Heavy white envelopes = legal documents
Embossed envelopes = invitations
Gold embossed envelopes = invitations to really posh dos

If you've done your research and produced content that is useful, relevant or amusing to your reader, then your subject line needs to let your reader know.

Why does it matter what you put in the subject line?

Your email is competing for attention with anywhere between 10 and 200 emails in your reader's inbox. Failing to put something that catches your reader's attention in the subject line could make the difference between 'open' or 'delete'.

Even though your reader has asked to receive your e-newsletter, you need to give them a reason to 'open' this particular e-newsletter.

How do you avoid a boring subject line?

Using just the name of your newsletter e.g. News from Frankie's Ice Cream Parlour No. 24,  doesn't give the reader a compelling reason to open your newsletter.

The 'From' field of your e-newsletter should already tell the reader this e-newsletter is from someone they know, so using the name of your business again in the subject line is missing an opportunity to pique your reader's interest and get them to open it.

So don't settle for the name of the publication.

Your subject line wants to arouse the curiosity of your reader, pique their interest, give them a reason to open that email.

If your e-newsletter contains several articles, then choose the most relevant for your readers and create a subject line that will encourage the reader to 'read more' by opening your email.

Be specific

The more specific your subject line is, the more it can pique your reader's interest. Rather than just 'cooking tips' get specific with '10 minute supper ideas'.

'Ways to save money on your heating bill' could become '5 ways to save money on your heating bill' or 'Save 15% off your heating bill'.

Don't go overboard

Of course some people take this to the other extreme and use screaming subject lines purely to get attention. 'Win a million pounds right now' is fine if you are e-mailing about a game where you can actually win a million pounds right now but if it's just a ruse to get them to read your e-newsletter about conservatories, then you are going to get into trouble.

If there is nothing in your e-newsletter that relates to the subject line you will annoy your reader and ultimately damage the relationship you are trying to build.

When can subject lines make a positive difference?

Every time you send an email you are communicating with someone. It might be a message to a customer, an associate, a member of staff, a friend or family member, an e-zine, an e-newsletter, an invoice or a link.

The subject line should give an indication of your content, pique curiosity or amuse. If you want people to take action when they read your email, give them a reason to open it. If they don't open it, you aren't going to get any action.

Why bother?

We are all bombarded by information every day. When you communicate, set yourself apart by showing consideration for your reader. A well thought out subject line will make your e-mail stand out in the crowd and your regular readers will begin to look forward to your well targeted, useful communications.

Don't put your e-mail communication at a disadvantage by using boring subject lines. Take the time to think up something engaging.

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